Two Of The Same

In November 2020 I wrote my very firstĀ Language Arts paragraph about masks that is on my blog, a few days later I got my feedback from my teacher and I noticed that I needed to improve. About a month later I was assigned to write another paragraph about Minecraft. This month I received my feedback and saw lots of growth and improvement on my paragraph and learned a valuable lesson. Lots of detail was added to my second paragraph and clarity to my writing, I may have wrote a bit TOO MUCH on my second paragraph. Next time I probably should have the right amount of information on my blogs.

I hope this has taught you something new. And nothing is perfect no matter what.